I walk among you
My head held high
Altering the age-old notion
I walk towards sky
And I walk fast
As you try to race
Yes! I am ahead
Leaving you to trace
I have learn the art
Well before you predicted
I have set myself free
Of the chains you invented
I demanded my place
And before you could reject
I tried to stand
Only to walk this perfect
I have beaten you dead
In your own game
Perhaps, u made a mistake
When you called me lame
The pain and agony
I endured on your birth
Accumulated for long
Showing its worth
You tried oppression
You practiced strength
The atrocities you carried
Lasted centuries length
The more you tortured
The stronger I have hit your face
I now walk ahead
Leaving you to trace
A gentle Reminder :
Be careful of your duty toward God in Whom ye claim (your rights) of one another, and toward the wombs (that bear you)" (Quran 4:1).
Updates:
#1 Something is wrong with my pen..it's not working and i am not writing :( I wrote this poem in pencil :P
#2 My one year of hijab is gonna complete in 10 days. The countdown starts from today. yay! but i can't think of anything to write :(. Blame my pen.
#3 My visitors crossed over 1000. Actually its 1110 right now. what a number sirji! Thanku , thanku, thanks a lot to all my visitors for reading my rantings.
#4 I just realized i am ranting in a post i should not *shut mouth with both hands* (as if someone reading this small script. Duh!
#1 Something is wrong with my pen..it's not working and i am not writing :( I wrote this poem in pencil :P
#2 My one year of hijab is gonna complete in 10 days. The countdown starts from today. yay! but i can't think of anything to write :(. Blame my pen.
#3 My visitors crossed over 1000. Actually its 1110 right now. what a number sirji! Thanku , thanku, thanks a lot to all my visitors for reading my rantings.
#4 I just realized i am ranting in a post i should not *shut mouth with both hands* (as if someone reading this small script. Duh!
4 comments:
Good poem ...
... A thought of a women trying to walk ahead and live life as she always wanted to be ...
... May God Bless You and May your dream come true ...
_Besides, you know all my thoughts about this now... refer to that if you need to_
this definitely deserves a standing ovation !!! perfecto !
Couldnt help commenting on this one...
Wonderfully written.
Simple yet deep enuf to go thru till the end.
Hey dear,
thanks for teh commetn...this place is so dusty..i shud come here often..atleast for ppl like u who still comment and put some life into thsi plc :P :)
thanks a ton for visiting
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